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Fragile Kingdom's avatar

Oh who is she? A misty memory

Max Seidman's avatar

I guess you’ll just have to read on and find out!

Holly's avatar

Loooove it!!!!! I really enjoy your style! Good reads 😄

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Thank you so much Holly!

Allison Ink's avatar

The vibes are vibing!!

And I see you’re in Denver. We just moved from Denver to closer to the foothills. :)

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Thanks!

And yeah, moved down to Denver a little while ago!

Allison Ink's avatar

Amazing! ☀️

Monica A Leyva's avatar

Beautiful atmospheric writing

Max Seidman's avatar

Thank you so much! Chapters 3 is up as of this afternoon. Hope you’ll keep reading!

Monica A Leyva's avatar

Yay. So excited

Jeffrey Zheng's avatar

Great, intriguing start to a book/novel!

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Thank you! Chapter 2 is up too. Hope you’ll subscribe and follow along!

Productivity With Care's avatar

Wow! So beautifully written. Reading Chapter 2 now!

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Thanks so much!

Casey Murphy's avatar

I really liked these lines in the opening:

“…the river may make a splash on its banks from time to time, but that’s about all nature’ll give us by way of sound. That’s these days, anyway.”

Wishing you all the best with your writing. Keep going! :)

Max Seidman's avatar

Thank you! I was really proud of that part haha

Casey Murphy's avatar

You should be! It definitely stood out.

Annie Barson's avatar

Amazing!!! I’m hooked

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Thanks Annie! Thanks for subscribing and I’m psyched to have you following along!

Brendan H's avatar

So great man, love the picture this paints

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Thanks so much Brendan! And thanks for subscribing. Hope you’ll enjoy the reading!

Velvet Vision's avatar

Haunting and cinematic in the best way. The repetition of the thunder line really sticks with you, and her entrance is unforgettable. It feels like something big is about to unfold 💎

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Thank you so much! I’ll be posting a chapter every Wednesday, so I hope you’ll subscribe and follow along!

George's avatar

Really exciting, eager to see where it goes

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Thanks so much! I’m posting every Wednesday afternoon, so check back!

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Thanks so much. I’m releasing a chapter every Wednesday so if you enjoyed it, I hope you’ll subscribe and follow along. Can’t wait to read your stuff too.